You seem to have wanted to make something and I commend you for that, you gave it a good shot and tried to animate some quite challenging things and whilst I respect you for not shying away from the challenge you have to appreciate the end result was pretty poor.
The art is very crude and the animation doesn't appear to have been planned out and whilst this wouldn't be a deal breaker the fact is I have no clue what this animation is about and can't for the life of me determine why you would have felt compelled to make it...
Gave it 3 and a half beause it's whilst it's technically sound it's very short (as you know) and feels like a bit of an after thought like it was done for the sake of being done.
All this I'm sure you know, but you've got me interested in your work so I'll be checking out your page soon as I post this. :)
you're completly correct. I did the line work for this in decemeber and just the past few days finished coloring and shading it to stick in my demo reel. Thanks! Check out Want That Car ;D
Love it, great voice acting, great concept.
If I had to critique one thing I would say some of the "fighting" goes on a bit longer than nessecery, a few of those cuts were more work than was required to create the same effect but this is just an exercise in nit picking.
It was awesome.
Very cool game, very addictive but it really needs another element to it to keep people playing for a prolonged period of time.
After 10 minutes I felt the RSI coming on.
This is awesome and just when you think the awesome is going to stop no... wait... and it's back again!
Love the way that falls back into the loop, well done sir! :)
Thank you, sir. Enjoy the kitty bloodfest :3
Pretty cool, not my kind of music but if I was looking for something heavy metalish for a animation or something with would work though I can't help but feel it's lacking some... for lack of a better word "umphf" you know?
Think it might be bass...
It's just dawned on me I have no clue what I'm talking about, if you know what I apparently don't then assume that was what I mentioned...
Best. Review. Ever.
"People think this is worthless review"
Lol. Sure man, thanks ^^
Great voices, great acting and rarest of all great audio quality. God I wish I knew you existed like a month ago. *sigh*
Love that "HA HA YEaaaah you better ru...ah no he's lookin at me." lol
I just finished an animation that got panned for the voice acting so I want to chill for a bit and maybe finally play Skyrim, but I would love to work with you on something.
Yeah sure thing! Whenever you're ready for it, I'll be around. Thank you very much!
You made a great start to this everything appears to be in place and it works, it has a depth and feel to it and conveys a lot with very little.
That said as a stand alone piece it's at a very early stage, once this has been fleshed out however I feel it would be an incredibly strong piece.
You are very correct. I would consider this to be a concept piece, I mostly focused on setting a type of mood. Although it is not as rendered as some of the Illustrations on here, as a concept piece, I feel it is finished.
I still have difficulties with when I feel a piece is finished, but I am working on finding that =]
Thanks for the review!
Nice contrast here between the simple cartoon like subjects and and dark gritty dirt textured colour really making the red pop.
Technically you can't knock it, the hair to the bottom left corner looks a bit weird but no so much that it stands out.
I am wondering why almost everything I seem to be clicking on is anime porn though...
Yeah, Karin has whack sausage hair. Haha. Totally anime over the top.
Thanks for your comment!
Oh and there is a lot of anime porn it seems.
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